A Forest Sliced

 

 

Once upon a forest sliced

arrow streaked 

from string pulled tight

arching bow

did launch death’s flight

hope was birthed 

the will to fight

Once upon a forest sliced

 

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4 Comments

  1. March 27, 2012 at 8:34 pm

    –Very nice!! Clean and the brevity works!

  2. brian miller said,

    March 27, 2012 at 9:31 pm

    hope and death hand in hand…all depends on which side of that arrow you are on, right? smiles. enchanting little verse…

  3. Shawna said,

    March 27, 2012 at 9:56 pm

    Love the repeated line. I cannot wait to see that movie. I read all the books a year ago.

    “the will to fight” … Nice.

  4. tashtoo said,

    March 28, 2012 at 1:17 pm

    Yup…waiting in line with Shawna on this one…my daughter keeps me up to date on all the popular fiction, and these books had me hooked. Love the rhythm and word play of the write…I can see the arrow…and wondering where it hits 😉


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